2008 WitchWRITER Finalist Beta
Post by Melissa on May 17, 2008 1:57:49 GMT -4
TITLE: Second Chance
AUTHOR: Melissa
TYPE: one-shot,
RATING: K
LEAD CHARACTERS: Cole and Phoebe
ORIGINAL CHARACTERS:
SHORT SUMMARY: This is my first song fic I have ever done. This is about Cole & how he felt when Phoebe broke up with him & never wanted to see him again.
Second Chance is a song that is sung & owned by 38. Special.
Second Chance
By: Melissa
Cole is outside of the manor. The rain is pouring down onto his face. He looks inside
the manor without anyone noticing. He thinks back to when Phoebe broke up with him.
It's been 6 months now, but he still loves her more than ever. When she told him she
never wanted to see him again, it was like she tore out his heart & shreded it.
His eyes start hurting from the rain, but he realizes he is crying. If only, if only, she
could understand he is part demon/human. That he wishes he could erase the past
& they could be together like it's suppose to be.
"Since you been gone
I feel my life slipping away
I look to the sky
And everything is turnin' grey
All I made was one mistake
How much more will I have to pay
Why can't you think it over
Why can't you forget about the past"
He looks back inside & sees Phoebe smiling at her sisters. How could she hurt us like
that. Doesn't she realizes how much she hurt him. Can't she feel what's inside my
heart. I beg for her to give me another chance, but she just shook her head no.
"When love makes this sound babe
A heart needs a second chance
Don't put me down babe
Can't you see I love you
Since you been gone I've been in a trance
This heart needs a second chance
Don't say it's over I just can't say goodbye"
AUTHOR: Melissa
TYPE: one-shot,
RATING: K
LEAD CHARACTERS: Cole and Phoebe
ORIGINAL CHARACTERS:
SHORT SUMMARY: This is my first song fic I have ever done. This is about Cole & how he felt when Phoebe broke up with him & never wanted to see him again.
Second Chance is a song that is sung & owned by 38. Special.
Second Chance
By: Melissa
Cole is outside of the manor. The rain is pouring down onto his face. He looks inside
the manor without anyone noticing. He thinks back to when Phoebe broke up with him.
It's been 6 months now, but he still loves her more than ever. When she told him she
never wanted to see him again, it was like she tore out his heart & shreded it.
His eyes start hurting from the rain, but he realizes he is crying. If only, if only, she
could understand he is part demon/human. That he wishes he could erase the past
& they could be together like it's suppose to be.
"Since you been gone
I feel my life slipping away
I look to the sky
And everything is turnin' grey
All I made was one mistake
How much more will I have to pay
Why can't you think it over
Why can't you forget about the past"
He looks back inside & sees Phoebe smiling at her sisters. How could she hurt us like
that. Doesn't she realizes how much she hurt him. Can't she feel what's inside my
heart. I beg for her to give me another chance, but she just shook her head no.
"When love makes this sound babe
A heart needs a second chance
Don't put me down babe
Can't you see I love you
Since you been gone I've been in a trance
This heart needs a second chance
Don't say it's over I just can't say goodbye"
