2008 WitchWRITER Finalist Beta
Post by Melissa on Jul 29, 2008 19:03:40 GMT -4
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AUTHOR: Melissa
TYPE (one-shot, chapters, part of a series): Chapters
RATING: (K, T, M, MA): K
LEAD CHARACTERS: Piper, Paige, & Phoebe
ORIGINAL CHARACTERS: The Innocent, Cole, and Phoebe
SHORT SUMMARY: A few months after vanquishing Zankou, Paige ends up saving a young woman from suicide, and they all believe she is someone they once knew. Is she who they think she is, and how far will they go to find out the truth, and saving her at the same time.
Chapter 01: Cole & a Little Baby
Paige is sitting there on the couch watching T.v. They have been demon free for the last month, so she figures she take advantage of it. She leans back & grabs a lollipop & sticks it her mouth. A baby cries from the other room. Piper, her older sister, had a baby girl about 4 months ago. Her husband Leo Wyatt, who is also a Whitelighter, is such a big help with their daughter Melinda. They all had to save Piper from the demon Zankou. He wanted their baby, but they vanquished him. But their has been other low level demons who have tried, but always ended up getting vanquished. Melinda is so smart for a little baby. She knows good from evil. She has this shield that covers her body whenever evil is near. She smiles thinking of her little niece.
In the background, she hears Phoebe coming through the door with her, I guess you would say, her boyfriend who used to be a demon, & now is human. She knows she still doesn't trust him half the time, but demons, or even Ex-demons can't be trusted.
"Hey Paige, you wont believe what happened today," Phoebe said as she sat on the couch beside her sister.
Paige takes her eyes off the T.v. & looks at her,"Let me guess. We have a demon on our hands, & you need our help to vanquish it's sorry behind."
Phoebe laughed,"No, their is no demon. Don't worry so much."
Paige replied,"Oh! What is it that happened today?"
Phoebe took a glance around to make sure Cole wasn't in hearing range. When she sees he isn't around, she continues to tell Paige her news. "Well, as Cole & I was out for dinner, he sorta took me by surprise & um, asked me a question
AUTHOR: Melissa
TYPE (one-shot, chapters, part of a series): Chapters
RATING: (K, T, M, MA): K
LEAD CHARACTERS: Piper, Paige, & Phoebe
ORIGINAL CHARACTERS: The Innocent, Cole, and Phoebe
SHORT SUMMARY: A few months after vanquishing Zankou, Paige ends up saving a young woman from suicide, and they all believe she is someone they once knew. Is she who they think she is, and how far will they go to find out the truth, and saving her at the same time.
Chapter 01: Cole & a Little Baby
Paige is sitting there on the couch watching T.v. They have been demon free for the last month, so she figures she take advantage of it. She leans back & grabs a lollipop & sticks it her mouth. A baby cries from the other room. Piper, her older sister, had a baby girl about 4 months ago. Her husband Leo Wyatt, who is also a Whitelighter, is such a big help with their daughter Melinda. They all had to save Piper from the demon Zankou. He wanted their baby, but they vanquished him. But their has been other low level demons who have tried, but always ended up getting vanquished. Melinda is so smart for a little baby. She knows good from evil. She has this shield that covers her body whenever evil is near. She smiles thinking of her little niece.
In the background, she hears Phoebe coming through the door with her, I guess you would say, her boyfriend who used to be a demon, & now is human. She knows she still doesn't trust him half the time, but demons, or even Ex-demons can't be trusted.
"Hey Paige, you wont believe what happened today," Phoebe said as she sat on the couch beside her sister.
Paige takes her eyes off the T.v. & looks at her,"Let me guess. We have a demon on our hands, & you need our help to vanquish it's sorry behind."
Phoebe laughed,"No, their is no demon. Don't worry so much."
Paige replied,"Oh! What is it that happened today?"
Phoebe took a glance around to make sure Cole wasn't in hearing range. When she sees he isn't around, she continues to tell Paige her news. "Well, as Cole & I was out for dinner, he sorta took me by surprise & um, asked me a question
